Make Small Revision to Law Discussion Assignment, writing homework help

Below are the comments from the professor on the discussion assignment that I wrote…please make revisions to the assignment based on the professor’s comments and feedback….need an A on this assignment please!

Professor comments:

Clarity and concision in the first sentence of the final paragraph needs revision.

Semicolons are only required when two independent clauses can stand alone (remove semicolons)

Reread the second and third paragraph, you kind of lost me.

After stating the two arguments, you need to elaborate more. What practices should a smart lawyer consider if he or she listens and hear like God?

Overall read the entire assignment out loud to yourself for self-evaluation.